Party at the Pools

In the holidays I went to my little nephew’s birthday party. It was at the pools with my family. My family all went, First I got changed and then I did a manu into the pool. I had a fun day at the pools. 

 

By Alan.

One thought on “ALan Holiday Recount

  1. Kia ora Alan,

    Well done for completing your recount. I love how you have used time connectives in your story. How old did you nephew turn?

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